Light King « Thread Started on Nov 8, 2007, 7:02pm »
Name Relon
Position King of the Lights
Tryout Post
Hooves rowred across the plain. The earthed parted as the sallion came though the land. His mighty body moved with mighty and power. He didn't slow nor speed up when he saw the water before him. His icy blue eyes stared at it. Lifting his legs higher, he ran into the small pond. Splashing the water unto the grass. His mighty head swung from left to right. It was then when he slowed to a stop, that he found his home. He would be the King of Lights. He would rule over the Land. He would watch over the mares in his herd. He would find a Mare to rule the land With him. For He was the Mighty Relon. He let a whail sound from his maw, it was a sound of justice, and power.
His power legs went up in a rear, His hooves striking the air, not once but twice. Landing with such peacefulness. He climed the land. His powerful head noding with approval, he looked around. Lowering his head, he began to graze on the sweet grass of the earth. His new home. He thought of mares soon grazing on these same plains. Foals galloping around. His thoughts got interuped as he heard a Snap come from the trees. Who Comes Unto the Kings Land Without Permission? I asked. I stood tall, my head high, my tail flowing in the wind. As the mountain lion came foruth, I tensed. I looked at him. Lowering my head, in a challenged. I charged for him.
The Mountain lion jumped towards Relon. Relon didn't move nor did he go forward but he waited for the mountain lion to land right infront of him, when he did Relon reared landing right beside the mountain lion. Rearing again, I landed on the mountain cats tail. The Mountain cat gave a growl. He jumped up, and raced towards the trees. Relon followed him till he was out of site. Thoughing his head in victory. Relon trotted back and began to graze and think about his soon to be herd.
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Re: Light King « Reply #1 on Nov 10, 2007, 2:53pm »
nice post, there are however a few mistakes in grammer/ spelling, but the actuall content is very good xD Right I will give others 2 weeks to also try for light king, if no-one else tries when 2 weeks are up, I will decide if you get the part. thank-you
ALSO, those of you who tried for both neutral king and dark king, pleaser this is your last warning, finish them posts!!! they have been left untouched for about two weeks now.. If they continue to be left un-finished then I will delete them to give others a chance to try... Thank-you .xShae De Colex.
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When Darkness shrouds, Light prevails
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Re: Light King « Reply #3 on Jan 11, 2008, 5:42pm »
okay, i havent been here for while due to internet switchover, but you get the part of li8ght king, please make a joining post in the light royal lands in the next few days please. If not the part will still be for ttry.